Writing #1 Introduction

Dear class,

Let me introduce myself. My name is Sumin Lim. I am 30 years old. I have a younger sister, younger brother. A sister is younger than a year and a brother is younger than me 8 years. I used to Live in Daejoen-Si with my family until I graduate high school. Last November, I got married and now I live with my husband in YongIn-Si. My husband likes doing exercise and swimming.

I like the music. I usually play the piano. I’ve been playing the piano since 5 years old. For me, music is just like another word to express my feeling. I also like to read books and watch TV soap drama.

I was majoring in computer science at the university. I started working as a developer since I graduated from grad, 2009. I've worked for previous company until last September. I’d like to take a challenge in my career so I transferred to this company.

I  set some goals of  this year.Writing and speaking well in English is one of those. I’d like to write emails fluently in English without any mistakes in grammar.